1.Evalutaion on students’ essay writing
Oyuntsetseg S ; Uzmee M ; Narmandakh S ; Naranchimeg S
Mongolian Journal of Health Sciences 2025;87(3):215-218
Background:
Written communication skill is of the important skills for
medical doctors and medical professionals. Written communication includes
daily notes, letters, memos, personal requests, summaries, reports,
editorials, and essays. An essay is a form of written assessment
used by educators to make inferences about a problem, evaluate a
situation, and assess their knowledge and understanding among students.
Essay writing is an important tool for developing thinking, critical
thinking, and analytical skills.
Aim:
To do a comparative evaluation of essays by first-year students of
pre-med and pre-health education
Materials and Methods:
In this study, essays written on the topic
“My Childhood” by students who studied Communication Skills in the
2022–2023 and 2023–2024 academic years were evaluated using the
6 criteria of the Rubric and the group discussion identified the problems
students faced when writing essays.
Results:
Among the essays of 568 first-year basic education students
who studied in the 2022–2023 academic year, 32.6% had spelling errors,
25.5% had grammatical and composition errors, and 20.4% were
insufficiently written in terms of content. It was identified that 28.6% of
the essays of 525 students who studied in the 2023–2024 academic
year contained spelling errors, 21.8% contained compositional errors,
and 18.6% lacked content. Additionally, 10.5% did not have the required
essay structure for writing their essays.
Conclusion
This indicates the need for content reforms in the curriculum
to further improve students' writing skills.
2.Clinical Features, Diagnostic Evaluation, and Treatment Outcomes of Chronic Hepatitis C in Mongolia
Amgalan B ; Myagmarjaltsan B ; Munkhjargal Z ; Uzmee S ; Naranzul N ; Khurelbaatar N ; Baatarkhuu O
Mongolian Journal of Health Sciences 2025;89(5):158-167
Background:
Chronic hepatitis C virus (HCV) infection remains a major global health concern. Approximately 55–85%
of individuals with acute HCV infection progress to chronic disease, which is often asymptomatic. Therefore, early
diagnosis and treatment are crucial to prevent long-term complications. This provided the rationale for our study to
evaluate the clinical characteristics, diagnosis, and treatment outcomes of chronic HCV patients using direct-acting
antivirals (DAAs), with comparisons by viral genotype.
Aim:
To compare the clinical features, diagnosis, and treatment outcomes of chronic hepatitis C according to viral
genotypes.
Materials and Methods:
A total of 1203 chronic HCV patients attending the outpatient department of Arkhangai Provincial
General Hospital were included in this prospective and retrospective cohort study. HCV genotyping was performed, and
patients received DAA therapy. Clinical manifestations, laboratory findings, HCV RNA levels, and fibrosis scores (APRI
and FIB-4) were assessed at baseline, at week 4 of treatment, and at 12 weeks post-treatment. Statistical analysis was
conducted using SPSS version 26.0.
Results:
: Among all patients, 6.7% had liver cirrhosis, and 1.4% had previously received interferon-based therapy. Patients
with cirrhosis more frequently reported fatigue, abdominal discomfort, insomnia, right upper quadrant pain and loss of
appetite (p<0.001). Virologic response at week 4 was 98.9%, and sustained virologic response at 12 weeks post-treatment
was 99.3%. The mean APRI score decreased from 0.71±0.67 to 0.31±0.54, and FIB-4 from 1.61±0.41 to 1.16±0.26
(p<0.001). The most common adverse events were fatigue, headache, and nausea.
Conclusion
Treatment outcomes were 99.5% in patients with genotype 1b, 100% in genotype 1a, and 75% in genotype
2, with statistically significant differences (p<0.001). Both APRI and FIB-4 scores significantly decreased after treatment,
confirming the effectiveness of DAA therapy in improving liver fibrosis (p<0.001).
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